Final Evaluative Report

Section 1
For my project the brief was to film an opening sequence to a thriller which will last around 3 minutes and will include film titles and an ident at the beginning. This will be done in a small group of 3 people and the thriller will be specified to a sub-genre of our choice. As part of my pre-production task, I chose a sub-genre of crime thriller and carried out some primary and secondary research to establish the conventions of this sub-genre and what kind of audience this sub-genre will appeal to.

In class we carried out various exercises into looking at thrillers and thriller subgenres before starting our project. At first we made a list of all of the characteristics of a thriller which included suspense, mystery, film noir, tension and a hero with a flaw or secret past. We also looked at the iconography used in thrillers and created a short storyboard for a thriller opening sequence to help us practice for our project. As a class we watched L.A confidential as this is a well-known thriller which includes many typical thriller conventions as well as the use of film noir including femme fatale within the main female character.

As part of my secondary research, I watched the opening sequences of two crime thrillers to see how they meet or contrast the expected conventions of this sub-genre. I chose to look at The Godfather as it was a highly successful film in its time, winning a great amount of awards such as 3 Academy awards and 5 Golden Globe awards such as Best Motion Picture and Best Director. I also used Heat as an example as it is another classic crime thriller which was released 20 years later than the Godfather so I thought it would be interesting to look at two opening sequences from different eras to see how they compared and contrasted. I carried out this secondary research to look at the uses of crime thriller conventions to see how well they represented the genre and to help me decide what elements I should use in my product which will represent my sub-genre well.

For my primary research, I asked 5 people from my target market which aspects of crime thrillers they most enjoy. I carried out this to gain some understanding of what kind of features appeal to my target market in a crime thriller as well as what they will hope for in my product and which elements I should use to ensure that my product is as successful as possible. I decided that my target audience should be people aged 15 years and above as this allows my group to use more thrilling elements in our product which will enable our product to excite the audience as it will not be restricted to the themes only suitable for young children, however it will still be suitable for most teenagers.

Section 2
I think that watching L.A confidential was very useful for my research as it allowed me to discover popular conventions used in a highly successful thriller, which I can consider using when creating ideas for my project. Finding out what aspects of crime thrillers my target audience enjoy the most was also very useful in informing the pre-production process of my thriller opening. This is because it allowed me to work out which elements I will need to include in my final product in order for it to be as successful as possible and in order for it to appeal to my target audience. Also, looking at all of the different features and conventions used in the opening sequences of two different successful crime thrillers was useful as it helped me to have an understanding of what kind of conventions I will need to include for my product to represent my sub-genre well.

I received useful feedback from my market testing as my target audience identified specific features of crime thrillers in which they enjoy the most and so this allowed me to discover what interests and excites my target audience and what attracts their attention the most. From this research I learned that my target market enjoy interesting storylines with a surprising twist, the build-up of tension, the amount of action which is used in the film, a hidden story between characters and they also enjoy the way the scenes excite them and draw their attention. From this research I gathered a variety of responses and so this gives me a range of elements which I should consider when creating ideas for my product. I can use this reliable evidence to make a successful opening scene which will intrigue my target audience and it will draw them in and so they will want to know what will happen next.

The research which I carried out influenced the development to my ideas by allowing me to create ideas of an opening scene involving a victim of a young girl which follows the conventions of a lot of thrillers of involving a young, vulnerable victim. When thinking of ideas to use for my product, I followed the feedback which I received from my market testing and decided that my opening sequence should involve the disappearance of this victim as this will create suspense and should draw the attention of my audience into wanting to find out where and how she disappeared. I decided that I should also use the typical convention specifically used in Heat and The Godfather of dark lighting to create an uneasy atmosphere and this should represent a crime thriller well. My ideas also involve using flashbacks to the scenes of the events which led to the disappearance of the young girl and also flashbacks of her getting ready to leave her house in a happy lighting, with tense music, to show that something bad is going to happen to her. Much like the opening sequence of Heat, there could be quiet, mysterious music playing in the background to add to the suspense.

Section 3
I think that my role of the camera operator was carried out successfully as I followed the aims of each camera shot on our storyboard. A good variety of camera shots were used to create an exciting thriller opening such as the panning shot at the beginning, which sets the scene well by showing a gloomy day in a quiet village and has a slow pace to create a mysterious atmosphere. The shots leading up to the victim’s bedroom were made to take the audience on an intriguing journey to find out what happened to the victim, i.e. the point of view shot of the stairs was used to look as though the audience were walking up the stairs to the bedroom. The other roles of editing and sound were performed well as the transitions to each shot were smooth, the lighting clearly revealed the flashback used and the music helped to build up tension. The voice recording of the interview between the detective and the victim’s mother also fitted in well with the product as it helped explained the mystery of the victim’s disappearance so this can lead up to a good story which will appeal to the audience.

Although most of our opening sequence was successful, there were several elements of our first cut which weren’t very effective and needed improvements, such as the camera shot lengths and some of the editing. The feedback from our first cut explained that some shots were too long and a few had continuity errors, for example in one shot the girl picks up her bag before she leaves her bedroom however she isn’t carrying anything as she goes downstairs, so we then cut the shot so there was no longer a continuity error. Other comments from our feedback were that some shots were quite boring, so we improved the editing by including more effective transitions into each shot and increased the brightness to highlight the flashback which made the sequence more interesting and added variety. Also there was no sound on our first cut because the soundtrack and interview recording weren’t uploaded on time, which was another improvement we were able to make.

I think that our product is similar to the opening of Heat as they both use similar elements to set the scene such as slow panning shots, and other typical thriller conventions such as gloomy lighting and mysterious music, which create a tense atmosphere. My groups opening soundtrack is similar to that of Heat’s as they are both quite edgy and create slight anxiety for the audience. On the other hand, the openings are of a rather different storyline as the opening of Heat includes a detective as the main character whereas our opening includes the victim who is a young girl on her way to a party. However in both openings, a variety of different camera shots and angles are used to create an interesting opening which attracts the audience’s attention.

In conclusion, our opening should appeal to our target audience as the camera shots and music used build up tension for the audience, and there’s a hidden story between the characters as our opening suggests that there’s a link between the person in the nearby car and the girl’s disappearance. Before filming, I had to remove some shots from our storyboard as they weren’t achievable to film such as the bird’s eye view shot of the girl’s bed. I also included a close up of the girl replying to a text which shows where the girl is going so our audience are able to understand the opening sequence. Once we received the feedback from our first cut, we made improvements including making some shots shorter, adding more brightness to the flashback and finally adding the interview recording. After making these necessary improvements to finish our final cut, our target audience said that the music and voice recording fitted in well as they explained the story and added to the tense atmosphere. They liked our flashback as the editing was soft so it was clear that this was a flashback. The only negative comments about our final product were that the lighting in some shots was too bright and a few transitions between shots were too quick. Overall I think I have fulfilled my role as the final shots link well together and successfully introduce an effective thriller story.

Gemma Barham

Evaluative Report

Section 1
For my project the brief was to film an opening sequence to a thriller which will last around 3 minutes and will include film titles and an ident at the beginning. This will be done in a small group of 3 people and the thriller will be specified to a sub-genre of our choice. As part of my pre-production task, I chose a sub-genre of crime thriller and carried out some primary and secondary research to establish the conventions of this sub-genre and what kind of audience this sub-genre will appeal to.

In class we carried out various exercises into looking at thrillers and thriller subgenres before starting our project. At first we made a list of all of the characteristics of a thriller which included suspense, mystery, film noir, tension and a hero with a flaw or secret past. We also looked at the iconography used in thrillers and created a short storyboard for a thriller opening sequence to help us practice for our project. As a class we watched L.A confidential as this is a well-known thriller which includes many typical thriller conventions as well as the use of film noir including femme fatale within the main female character.

As part of my secondary research, I watched the opening sequences of two crime thrillers to see how they meet or contrast the expected conventions of this sub-genre. I chose to look at The Godfather as it was a highly successful film in its time, winning a great amount of awards such as 3 Academy awards and 5 Golden Globe awards such as Best Motion Picture and Best Director. I also used Heat as an example as it is another classic crime thriller which was released 20 years later than the Godfather so I thought it would be interesting to look at two opening sequences from different eras to see how they compared and contrasted. I carried out this secondary research to look at the uses of crime thriller conventions to see how well they represented the genre and to help me decide what elements I should use in my product which will represent my sub-genre well.

For my primary research, I asked 5 people from my target market which aspects of crime thrillers they most enjoy. I carried out this to gain some understanding of what kind of features appeal to my target market in a crime thriller as well as what they will hope for in my product and which elements I should use to ensure that my product is as successful as possible. I decided that my target audience should be people aged 15 years and above as this allows my group to use more thrilling elements in our product which will enable our product to excite the audience as it will not be restricted to the themes only suitable for young children, however it will still be suitable for most teenagers.

Section 2

I think that watching L.A confidential was very useful for my research as it allowed me to discover popular conventions used in a highly successful thriller, which I can consider using when creating ideas for my project. Finding out what aspects of crime thrillers my target audience enjoy the most was also very useful in informing the pre-production process of my thriller opening. This is because it allowed me to work out which elements I will need to include in my final product in order for it to be as successful as possible and in order for it to appeal to my target audience. Also, looking at all of the different features and conventions used in the opening sequences of two different successful crime thrillers was useful as it helped me to have an understanding of what kind of conventions I will need to include for my product to represent my sub-genre well.

I received useful feedback from my market testing as my target audience identified specific features of crime thrillers in which they enjoy the most and so this allowed me to discover what interests and excites my target audience and what attracts their attention the most. From this research I learned that my target market enjoy interesting storylines with a surprising twist, the build-up of tension, the amount of action which is used in the film, a hidden story between characters and they also enjoy the way the scenes excite them and draw their attention. From this research I gathered a variety of responses and so this gives me a range of elements which I should consider when creating ideas for my product. I can use this reliable evidence to make a successful opening scene which will intrigue my target audience and it will draw them in and so they will want to know what will happen next.

The research which I carried out influenced the development to my ideas by allowing me to create ideas of an opening scene involving a victim of a young girl which follows the conventions of a lot of thrillers of involving a young, vulnerable victim. When thinking of ideas to use for my product, I followed the feedback which I received from my market testing and decided that my opening sequence should involve the disappearance of this victim as this will create suspense and should draw the attention of my audience into wanting to find out where and how she disappeared. I decided that I should also use the typical convention specifically used in Heat and The Godfather of dark lighting to create an uneasy atmosphere and this should represent a crime thriller well. My ideas also involve using flashbacks to the scenes of the events which led to the disappearance of the young girl and also flashbacks of her getting ready to leave her house in a happy lighting, with tense music, to show that something bad is going to happen to her. Much like the opening sequence of Heat, there could be quiet, mysterious music playing in the background to add to the suspense.

Gemma Barham

Test shots

During one of our lessons we decided to test out some camera shots which we were planning on using for our opening sequence to make sure we are able to film our shots as well as we can for our final piece.

This is a mid shot of the main character (victim) looking in the mirror which will be set in a bedroom and will show that she is getting ready to go out. It will be a flashback of before she disappeared.

This is a long shot of a car driving past from the distance.

This is a panning shot which pans across the corridor from one end to the other which we will include but instead it will be set in the street in which the victim lives, of the houses around  hers.

This is another panning shot of houses down a road which is more realistic to how the final shot will look.

This is a tracking point of view shot of going up the stairs, which will be used in the victims house leading up to her bedroom before we discover that she has disappeared.

This is a tracking shot of doors opening which we will use near the start of our opening sequence of the front door of the victim's house.

Individual roles for our product

As a group we assigned individual roles of which we felt were most suitable to each person in the group. The roles include:

• Director
• Camera operator
• Editor
• Performer
• Sound
• Cinematographer
• Lighting

For our project I will be in charge of operating the camera as well as lighting. A camera operator is the operator of a film or video camera. The camera operator is responsible for physically operating the camera, maintaining composition and camera angles throughout a given scene or shot and capturing the scenes in the film the way it is anticipated. Important camera operator skills include choreographing and framing shots, as well as knowledge of and the ability to select appropriate camera lenses and other equipment to portray dramatic scenes. The way the camera seamlessly moves with ease is a key responsibility of the camera operator as it is essential to the narrative flow of films. Camera operators are also usually the first to use the eye piece and therefore assess how all the elements of the scene will come together to create a substantial cinematic experience.

In thriller films the camera operator tends to use various shot types, such as Point of View shots, close-ups, birds eye view shot and worms eye view shot, to draw in the attention of the audience and create a tense atmosphere. In The Godfather, which I used as part of my secondary research in my pre-production task, the point of view shot is used extensively, especially during the opening scene when Don Corleone is listening to requests from wedding guests.

Gemma Barham

Storyboard decision

On mondays lesson we decided to use a storyboard based around the disappearance of a young girl from her home. We decided on this storyboard because its easy to film and there are more sources available. We can also experiment with lighting by filming outside and inside. This storyboard features scenes in a girls house which means when filming we are able to use resources available in the house and we can use last minute props.


We also decided on our roles in the group:
Director: Anna May
Sound: Anna May
Filmer: Gemma
Actress: Tegan
Editor: Tegan
Cinematographer: Anna May
Lighting: Gemma

Mise-en-scene 
We will make sure that the mise-en-scene suits the thriller genre.  For this we will use props such as a broken glass.

Shot list:
1- Ident (5 seconds)
2- Panning shot of houses (5 seconds)
3-  Long shot of house (4 seconds)
4- Door opening (3 seconds)
5- Shot walking up to the bedroom (10 seconds)
6- Bedroom door opening (3 seconds)
7- Panning bedroom shot (7 seconds)
8- Bed shot from birds eye view (3 seconds)
9- Drink knocked over (2 seconds)
10- Close up of drink with dripping (5 seconds)
11- Phone on side (3 seconds)
12-Shot from behind girl doing makeup in the mirror (10 seconds)
13- Shot of her putting coat on (6 seconds)
14- Gets a text and puts phone down (8 seconds)
15- Shot followed down the stairs (15 seconds)
16- Gets to front door (3 seconds)
17- Hand to pocket (4 seconds)
18- Door left open while she gets keys (3 seconds)
19- Zooms into car in distance through front door (8 seconds)
20- Shot from man in cars point of view (6 seconds)
21- She leaves house (5 seconds)
22- Shot from behind her walking down street (5 seconds)
23- Car door opening (2 seconds)
24- Film title (5 seconds)

Research into the subgenre of crime thrillers and preparation for the beginning work on my storyboard

Opening scenes...

Heat
The opening sequence of Heat follows the expected conventions of most crime thrillers by starting off with a dark scene at night with the main light coming from a train in the background and smoke drifting over the train to immediately create tension and to draw the attention of the audience. It also uses tense music which becomes louder and therefore more dramatic as the train travels closer to the camera, and the pitch of the music becomes higher which gives the impression to the audience that something bad could happen. It also uses sound effects which are created to make the audience feel uneasy like most thrillers use, for example the sound of the train become louder as the train travels closer towards the camera and the train screeches very abruptly as it stops. There is a wide variation of camera angles used in the opening scene of Heat once one of the main characters is introduced, starting with a close up shot when he is getting off the train which then changes to the view from behind the character to a close up of his feet which gives the feeling of the audience following him to find out where he is going. Overall this opening uses a lot of typical crime thriller conventions including the lighting and music as it is a very mysterious scene and creates tension for the audience.

The Godfather
The music in the opening sequence of The Godfather creates tension straight away by using a violin during the opening credits to build up to the scene. It then stop\s just before the first line 'I believe in America' which is followed by a gradual fade in to the close up shot of a main character. This shot is in a very dark setting with the light creating shadows down the characters face as he is explaining to someone about an attack on his daughter. The camera then very gradually zooms out to show the hand and silhouette of someone sitting at a desk this suggests that the man is speaking to some sort of private investigator. The sound effects in the background of birds chirping isn't a very typical convention used in a crime thriller however the music and lighting represents a crime thriller very well. Also, the iconography in the scene of the blinds in the background and a tall office chair with a large desk shows that this is an office in which will symbolise the investigating of a crime which has occurred in the film.

Target Audience
I think that the target audience for our product should be those aged 15 years and above as this allows us to use a lot more thrilling elements in our product which will excite the audience as it will not be restricted to the themes only suitable for young children, however it will still be suitable for most teenagers. I asked 5 people from this social group which aspects of crime thrillers they most enjoy and the results were:

• Interesting storylines with a surprising twist
• The build up of tension
• The way the scenes excite them and draw their attention
• The amount of action which is used in the film
• A hidden story between characters

Ideas for our opening sequence:

• Based on the disappearance of a victim (a teenage girl)
• The opening could show flashbacks of the events which led to the disappearance
• The first shot would be of the girls bedroom in a dark light, the way it was left before she disappeared as if nothing has moved since her disappearance, and there could be a flashback of her getting ready to leave the house in a happy lighting with tense music to show that something bad is going to happen to her
• Then we could see her parents at the door looking into the room with disbelief and explaining to a police officer that she couldn't have ran away as she was leaving for a normal day
• The titles will show when the camera is panning across the girls bedroom
• The girls mum is explaining that she isn't the type of girl to get into trouble and so adds to the mystery of her disappearance.
• There will be quiet, mysterious music playing in the background to add to the suspense

Gemma Barham